Thursday, February 7, 2008

From Heaven with love…




(Don't even dare to read this half asleep...! THE STUFF is a bit too long!!!)


You are making me tired.

Son, I have a trillion cases to look into every moment. You know that well right?

Ya,I do. If you can’t do all this alone…try a retirement !!!…grrr…sorry im outta patience…

Tell me what your problem is.

I wanna know if this is the treatment I deserve.

Oh! Dear. You have been out there for twenty years and all that I’ve heard from you is complaints.

I have my fundamental rights!!! Right?

Its high time for amending that thing called constitution...Well…well exercise them…continue…

Im fed up Oh Lord! you know how well I love all those pig heads out there. I spend atleast three quarters of my time thinking of others. Still I suffer humiliation, neglect. I am fed up.

Hi hi... ‘fed’ up? Son that’s exactly why you are here now…

Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrr.

k… k…continue…

You’ve heard my speeches.

Ya I have.

You love my styles right?

OH! I can't stand this 'self praising' anymore..okay…Whats your point?

Half the audience had turned into wolves when I took the microphone in my hands.

Lucky, I wasn't there...

??????

Else I would've turned into one!!!


Grrrr…tell me now…you belong to me or them?

I belong to all…

Oh! Cut the crap. No philosophies here.

K...K…well…any thing else?


Do you know the total time I’ve spend loving her? Caring for her?

She never demanded that, did she?

Grrrrrrrrr...You are not supporting me....


Ha ha…speak son…

I’ve spend half my pocket money recharging my phone…I send hundreds of messages every week to all corners. Asking “ how r ye”… “how did the exams go”...and all blah blah…a few misers respond with missed calls..some don’t even respond.

Everyone has his or her life to look right? If you fail to do that ,why blame others?

Oh! Are you here to console me or criticize me?

Son. I know you well. That’s why I send so many people out there for you. You are aware…


Ya lord..i know…but I times…I feel dumped…

Leave it dear.

No, I can’t. How can I leave it? I always wanted someone who belonged to me…just me…you never give me that.

I wanted a friend…

I had sent one….

Ya but…………

What ‘ BUT’ ? You repeat 60 times a minute… ‘She’s your this’... ‘she’s your that’… ‘Lucky having you’… and so on…and still you suspect her…

That is ‘human’ right?

That is not ‘human’…! You go on complaining… ‘do you know how much I care for you’… ‘do you know what sum I spend for you’… ‘What energy I ‘waste’ for you…but still you never care for me’ and all that…

But lord I rarely mean anything when I say she doesn’t care for me…’coz I know she does care…!

That’s cruelty right…?

Perhaps yes…hey hey …..so now I am the culprit?

HI HI BINGO!!!

Nothing doing…and where is my love?

I send one right? Not one...many..

Ya a dozen..grrrr….u make me paralyzed…you send gals I can love…and lets me wish to own them…just ‘wish’..and right in front of my eyes they grow and disappear…and at last I remain a loser…

Loser? Who? You are not a loser…just a slow learner… always late when you realize things… say… 'learning' … when did you start that? When you found that if you remain slow...you will lose someone you craved for…again that was for ‘someone’...and not to fulfill the dreams of those loving parents…

Yupp!!! This ain’t fair…I came here to fire you for the ‘injustice’ I am suffering and now the ball is in your court…

Hi hi.. .you always want people praising you right?

Ya. Even when my dearest ones call me pompous…I love that…even when I am mocked at and jeered at…I love that…simply because of the fact that everyone knows that I am breathing…I want attention…always…someone should be with me every time…!!!

Don’t worry dude…there are lots who love you…care for you...be satisfied…you can’t expect all to do the same…can you?

Okay okay…cut all that…what are you going to do ‘now’?

What “now”..what has happened has happened…

That’s not it…this ain’t fair lord…

Whats not fair..? I didn’t ask you to adore the beauty of a college going gal while crossing the road did I?

You created beauty for us to enjoy right?

Right. But not while you are just seconds away from getting run over by a racing KSRTC bus…!!!

But that gal could have dressed properly so that I couldn’t have lost my concentration completely…moreover she was too beautiful…and you created her pretty…didn’t you

Now blame that gal for her beauty… and yes... its my fault for having made her pretty... hmmm…. Son…you just won’t change…k... I’ll give ye a choice...HELL or HEAVEN?

Mixture of both…!

Earth…?

You got that buddy...yupp...lord…

Hmmm…so you want another chance…?

But promise me…this is not my last chance…

What? So you’ll repeat similar things again?

Oh! Lord... ‘to err is human’… right?

Right right...kid…get off from here now…here is your return ticket…hooo…I am confused now…Assistant get me some tablet to drive this ‘ headache’ off


(AND I WAKE UP TO FIND MYSELF COVERED WITH PLASTERS AND BANDAGES…ON ONE SIDE OF MY BED IS MY BELOVED FRIEND AND ON THE OTHER SIDE IS MY LOVE…AND ALL AROUND I FIND MY CLASS MATES…AND FEW DOCTORS…THEN I HEAR SOMEONE ON PHONE SCREAMING, “AUNTIE DON’T WEEP…HE IS BREATHING AGAIN…”

OH BEAUTIFUL WORLD…BACK I AM...AGAIN...)

7 comments:

bhavya said...

njanoru sathyam parayatte.......i idea ws gd bt kurachu overayiii.................

nikku said...

yaa...itz a nice piece of vork....except d singing part...i likd every ding...

Vishnu said...

Nithin: hiiiiiiiii


Nithin Jayan: kochu..here...
Vishnu: hi man...
saw ur story...


Nithin: ya speak...


Vishnu: good one...


Nithin: was it too lengthy?


Vishnu: nope not too much..


Nithin: how does a reader feel..?funny or serious stuff?


Vishnu: feels funny...
;)


Nithin: thank god...
njan onnu pedichu...
comedy udheshichavasaanam art cinema polaakumonnu...
poyo?


Vishnu: he he...
ok...
but not very funny!!!
;)


Nithin: hmmmm....gotta modify it again then....it seems too personal..de content...


Vishnu: ya....
is it ur story?
;)


Nithin: all what i write r things that occur 2 me...
plus lotz of masala..!!!!!!!


Vishnu: mmm....
feels like too much truth in it....
;)


Nithin: hooo....
dats y i call it evincere....
evince meanse to express..
vanquish etc...
hi hi


Vishnu: ok ok....
so having a hard time?
;)


Nithin: nothin hi hi...


Vishnu: thee illathe puka undavilla...
;)


Nithin: ha ha...


Vishnu: jus look at ur stories!!!


Nithin: 50% facts...
50%masala


Vishnu: oh seri seri...
;)
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Rest of chat removed on request from evincere... because....??
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neetz said...

hey gud piece of work i"d say.tactful yet makes sense ,a sad moment expressed in a hilarious mood..hmm since ur back for another chance,here's a piece of advice .."learn to laugh at urself".n continue updating evincre.

neetz said...

i mean evincere..

danu... said...

hey, do u kw wat i first thought aftr readin dis.....'ho, njanoru daivamaakathathu ente bhagyam.... allayirunenkil ninne polulla vattanmarude prashnangalku utharam koduthu oru vazhiyakumaayirunnu....'

shobhna said...

U r a vattan.